Have you ever had this experience:  you had a great idea for a story, so you spent an afternoon or a week or two, getting it down on paper.

Then, you read through it, but it didn’t seem to work so well, so you revised it. Maybe you asked your mom or good friend for some advice on it. They like it.

“It’s great,” they said.

You read through again. Something wasn’t quite working with it. But, you weren’t sure what that elusive “something” was.

I think as writers buy generic wellbutrin we’ve all had that experience, and sometimes it’s hard (really, really hard) to identify what’s working or not in our own stories and how to fix them.

Check out this video  (ack – my first video ever so this is a little scary) for my #1 tip for making your writing shine. There’s some bonus tips in there too toward the end.

After you’ve watched, leave a comment below with your biggest struggle when it comes to making your writing shine.

Here’s to sparkly, amazing stories.